Ways I get Myself to Write, Method #6: Master Scene Outline

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About a month ago, I mentioned something about discovering a new way to outline. I didn’t realize it when I was in the middle of creating my outline, but after I had made it, I saw that using outlines (specifically this one) is another way I motivate myself to write.

In this outline, I created a bulleted list and put all the excerpts I have written for my FF series in chronological order, separated into their respective books. Then, I added all the scene ideas I had swirling around in my head to the list, adding a brief description/phrase/word to help me remember what the idea was about. After that, I looked at all the reject scenes that I had written for my series but had absolutely no place in any of the books and tried to find ways to modify them so that I could include them in the story. Finally, I marked the scenes that I had just barely started (baby scenes 😛 ), the ones I needed to edit, and the ones that needed major revisions. As you may have guessed by now, I color-coded the different types of scenes within my outline and therefore made it easier to see what I needed to work on (and also because I love colors and am an organizational freak 😛 ). I included a screenshot of a template for the outline (although it’s really not that complicated and the rules can be completely up to you) as well as a pic of the color key I use. The reason why I’m even including this method in my series is because 1) I literally came up with this a few weeks ago 2) IT IS SO NICE TO HAVE ALL THE SCENES FOR YOUR STORY IN ONE PLACE and 3) looking at the scenes I have written encourages me to keep writing and gets my mind thinking about what else needs to happen to further connect the pre-exsisting scenes and thus, finish the story.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy/try this new method of outlining for your story and that it helps motivate you to write some more or even start writing your very first story!

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Adventures in Story Cube Writing…

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Hey, young writers! Just wanted to share a little bit of what I’ve been doing with my story cubes. I usually start by opening up a Word Document and writing down what I rolled at the top so I can look back on it and remember what inspired my scene. Then, I set my timer on my phone to 25 minutes and start writing. I’ve included a pic of what my header looks like and a little piece of a scene that I wrote using my cubes. 🙂

Three quick things: 1) I only used 3 categories/cubes for this scene, this isn’t ALL of the scene (or the final version 😛 ), and the colors at the top correspond to the category rolled (voyage dice are green, action dice are blue, and enchanted dice come in pink). I’ve also included a picture of what I rolled below…

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Ways I get Myself to Write, Method #5: Story Cubes

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In one of my previous writing updates, I promised to write about the ABSOLUTELY AMAZING creative writing tools I’ve found and how they inspire me to write. That was in June. It’s now the end of July. Oops! 😛 With that being said, let me introduce you to some new and very inspirational friends. They are called story cubes. Now, there are many, many, many different brands of story cubes and different packs containing specific story categories within those packs within each of the brands. Taking into account how long you actually want to spend reading this article and the time I actually want to spend time typing it/how badly I want to keep all sense of feeling in my fingertips, I’ve decided to only talk about my top 3 favorite brands of story cubes.

#1: Rory’s Story Cubes by Gamewright

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Okay, these boys are my homies. But seriously, I love these story cubes. They have adorable, thought-provoking pictures on each of their 6-sides and while you can clearly understand some of the images on the die, others are less obvious and therefore, completely open to your creative interpretation, depending on what story you are using the cube(s) for. What’s even cooler is that the creators at Gamewright purposely refrained from posting specific meanings for their die on their website (I know, I checked) in order to allow people to better use their imaginations. How cool is that? This particular brand has 3 packs of 9 dice each (categories include: original, actions, and voyages) and about 9 packs of 3 dice each (categories are: enchanted, clues, prehistoric, medic, score, intergalactic, mythic, animalia, and fright). Each box contains instructions on how to actually use the dice, but I personally like to pick a dice from each category (I have 6 categories so far), then roll them and see what I get. As I look at the images, I try to think how they could apply to my story or help my story along if I’m stuck in a certain spot. I’m always amazed at how a seemingly random group of pictures can sometimes inspire a full-fledged scene in my head and if it doesn’t, well hey, at least I can enjoy laughing over the crazy mix-up I got. 😛

#2 Story Time Dice by Imagination Generation

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These dice are pretty cool in their own right. There are 3 packs of 7 dice each in 3 different versions: original Story Time, Fairy Tales, and Scary Tales. Not only that, but these dice come in different shapes, with a different amount of sides for every one. And each dice is filled with images that pertain to a specific story element. For example, one dice is just for the setting aspect of the story, another is for tools, another for characters, another for challenges, etc. What’s more, the packages each come with their own picture guide to explain the images on the cubes. It does take out the element of using your imagination to bend the pictures to whatever you think they look like, but I think it’s nice to be able to see what the images actually are in case you really have no clue. 😉 In addition to the guide, there are suggestions for games to play but again, I just roll each die and go from there. I only have the original set, but I’m hoping to get the fairy tale pack soon!

#3 Magic & Fairy Tale Dice by Norman and Jules

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This brand also comes in Pirate Adventure and Space Travel packs. These are wooden dice that have very beautiful, slightly more detailed pictures on them compared to that of Gamewright’s Story Cubes. This game actually has a special red die, and when rolling all the other cubes, if you happen to roll a red swirl on one of them, you get to roll the special red die and add that image to your story mixture. I really like the vintage look of these cubes and the idea of the special die. It’s fun looking at all your “normal” cubes and being like, “Alright, I think I know what scene I’m going to write using what I got.” but then you realize you also rolled a red swirl and therefore have to roll the red cube. THEN, you get a really random picture that completely messes with your original scene idea and you’re like, “#PLOTTWIST!”. (That might just be me…)

Whichever brand, pack, or number of cubes you like, I highly suggest that you get them! (If you go to our Amazon Store, you can even buy some of the story cubes I’ve talked about on here.)

Using story cubes is a fun way to get yourself to write without the hassle of having to come up with your own topic and individual story elements. Try it, on your own or with a friend. Either way, you’ll laugh so much, you might just die. #punsarelife

KelseyDragon17’s 3rd PO Excerpt

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Hey, it’s KelseyDragon17 here! I’m writing this post to show you guys how I’ve been doing with writing in 3rd Person Omniscient. Young Writer posted previously from one of her stories, so I’ve decided to include a piece of mine. I hope you like it! 🙂

(also my main character, Kelsey, is a dragon [as maybe you could have guessed from my screen name])

Kelsey dove off the cliff, not even thinking about her own safety as she watched her only companion plummeting to his death. She pulled her wings in tight to gain as much speed as she could to reach him in time.

Out of the corner of his eye, Jeff saw a blue streak above him. But he couldn’t process what that streak was. All he knew was he was falling and he was going to die. He couldn’t think of anything other than his rapidly approaching death. Then out of nowhere something solid like a thick branch whacked him in the chest, and despite getting the air knocked out of him, he grasped it for dear life.

She pulled him off her tail and held him against her chest, all the while flailing her wings around, trying to catch the air. She was panicking, as was Jeff.

And in their panic, they both prayed. Kelsey cried out in despair, God, I haven’t trusted you in the past to guide me. But I’m asking you now, please Father, save me to save Jeff. Jeff’s prayer cannot be translated into words, but he thought of God and desperately cried out for both of their lives.

Kelsey opened her wings at long last, and the wind caught underneath the membrane. She opened her eyes and saw the trees blur past her, and she knew her prayer was answered. And to her, flying was amazing. She flapped once to keep her and Jeff from gliding into the trees.

Jeff kept his eyes shut, waiting for the end to come, but it never did. And his stomach was no longer in his throat from falling. He felt something nudge his head and he opened his teary eyes to see Kelsey, her head flipped upside down, staring at him, wondering if he were okay. He quickly wiped his tears, I hope she didn’t see that.

She did, though she didn’t mind. I’ve got you, Jeff.

Writing in 3rd Person Omniscient…

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Hello, young writers! So, the last time I posted an article, it was about a book I had read that had been written in 3rd person omniscient. (If you need a refresher on what exactly I said or what book I talked about *cough cough* it was The Princess check out this link.) Anyway, as I was saying, after talking endlessly about the advantages of writing a story in 3rd PO and encouraging you all to try to at least writing something in that POV, a thought occurred to me: I haven’t written anything in 3rd PO! 3rd Person Limited? All the time. 1st Person? It’s how I started writing. I’ve even occasionally written in 2nd Person, but NEVER 3rd PO. Then I thought, well, if I’m encouraging other writers to try this POV, shouldn’t I do the same? I can’t very well recommend something without having tried it. That’s why I’ve decided to post a little snip-it of a scene I wrote for my FF story. Now, when I originally wrote it, it was in 1st Person from one of my heroine’s POV. I’ve included that original perspective below along with the 3rd PO version so you can compare and contrast the differences between the different POVs (and also so I can say I actually tried 😛 ). When reading in different perspectives/POVs I always like to ask myself: which viewpoint makes me feel more connected to the characters? Which viewpoint gives me a clearer picture of what’s going on with each of the characters and the action within the story? Just food for thought. Hope you enjoy seeing the different perspectives!

Rowena’s POV:

“Well, it’s not really about what you want, is it?” he said quietly, although his voice was full of menace.

“Excuse me?”

“You may be okay with dying, but I’m not.”

“I know, that’s why I…”

“No, you don’t get it.” he said, his voice hard, his dark eyes even harder. A chill ran down my spine. “I’m not okay with you dying, so excuse me if I don’t sympathize with what you’re going through.”

That was a slap to the face.

“Demy, I’m sorry you feel that way, but there’s nothing we can do about it now.”

He snorted then glared at me.

“That’s the problem!” Demetry yelled across the courtyard, frustration and anger fueling his words. He threw up his hands and balls of fire shot out of them haphazardly. He’d scorched a nearby tree and set fire to a small shrub, but he didn’t care. His eyes shooting daggers, he slowly stalked toward me. I had to fight the urge to back up. I had never seen him so furious, and I’d known him before he’d “mellowed” out. “You didn’t give us a chance to do anything about it! You just decided on your own! How could you have been so selfish?”

I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. I just stared up at him incredulously.

“How could I have been so selfish? Seriously? I did this to save all of you!”

“And did we ask you to throw your life away in the process? If you had just waited, we could have figured out another way!” he said, nostrils flaring as he loomed over me.

 

3rd Person Omniscient:

“Well, it’s not really about what you want, is it?” he said quietly, although his voice was full of menace. She’d had no idea what she’d done. What she was doing to him.

“Excuse me?” Rowena asked, completely lost as to why Demetry had suddenly become so cold. He just stood there, his gaze so intense she felt as though he was burning a whole through her.

“You may be okay with dying, but I’m not.”

“I know, that’s why I…”

“No, you don’t get it.” he said, his voice hard, his dark eyes even harder. A chill ran down Rowena’s spine. “I’m not okay with you dying, so excuse me if I don’t sympathize with what you’re going through.”

That was a slap to the face.

“Demy, I’m sorry you feel that way, but there’s nothing we can do about it now.”

Demetry snorted then glared at her. He couldn’t believe her. She was acting as if choosing to sacrifice herself without consulting anyone was nothing. It was not nothing.

“That’s the problem!” Demetry yelled across the courtyard, frustration and anger fueling his words. He threw up his hands and balls of fire shot out of them haphazardly. He’d scorched a nearby tree and set fire to a small shrub, but he didn’t care. His eyes shooting daggers, he slowly stalked toward Rowena. She had to fight the urge to back up. She had never seen him so furious, and she’d known him before he’d “mellowed” out. “You didn’t give us a chance to do anything about it! You just decided on your own! How could you have been so selfish?”

Ro couldn’t believe what she was hearing. She just stared up at him incredulously.

“How could I have been so selfish? Seriously? I did this to save all of you!”

“And did we ask you to throw your life away in the process? If you had just waited, we could have figured out another way!” he said, nostrils flaring as he loomed over her. How blind could he be? If Rowena had known how ungrateful he was going to be about her dying to save him and the rest of her family and friends, she might have reconsidered her choice.

A little reflection…

Writing in 3rd PO IS SO HARD!!! It’s a little overwhelming having to recount every character’s thoughts, feelings, motives, emotions, and actions. To make it easier on myself, I started thinking about writing in 3rd PO as if I’m combining the 3rd Person Limited viewpoints I usually write for each character into one scene. Basically, the scene I would have written following the one above would have talked about how Demetry is feeling about Rowena’s impending death. Instead of having to write that scene in addition to the one above (even though it’s originally in 1st Person), I now only have one scene that encompasses both characters’ viewpoints. Am I a 3rd PO convert? Hard to say, but hey, at least I tried. 😛 How about you?

KelseyDragon17’s Source of Inspiration, Ways I get Myself to Write: Method #4

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I’m back! How’s everyone doing? I hope well 🙂

So, Young Writer asked me to write another article on how I get inspiration to write. It took me a while to think of it to be honest. How else do I get inspiration besides music (currently listening to Heathens by Twenty One Pilots)? But then I realized, it’s my art.

Nearly all of my artwork is concept art for my stories. Sometimes when I get an idea, I just need to draw it. It helps me visualize it, but most importantly, to remember it. Remembering my ideas is not a strong point of mine. I usually have to tether it to something, like drawing or painting, and even with a song.

This drawing was an image that came to mind one day while doing schoolwork of all things, and I had to draw it. I did this a few years ago, so its not very pretty, but this has become a scene in one of my few major stories I’m currently working on now. Mermaid

The above picture was done entirely in pencil, using a Bic 0.7mm HB #2 mechanical pencil. I love these pencils for sketching because the point is always sharp, however in hindsight, I can say I wouldn’t recommend it for coloring in a picture like this. 😉

I try to expand my knowledge of art mediums best I can so I can find new ways to get whats in my brain on paper (which is difficult). My favorite types are:

  1. Pencil (def #1)
  2. Alcohol-based art markers (newbie at this!)
  3. Watercolors (I’m okay at it?)
  4. Acrylics (not too skilled in this one)
  5. Colored pencil (a go-to for quick color)
  6. Pen (for on-the-go sketches)

If any of you are saying, “But KD17, I can’t draw or paint!”, don’t worry! Even just attempting to visualize something can help you remember. Here is an (obviously) unfinished drawing I’ve done. This is very, very vague. But when I was looking for drawings I could put into this post, I came across this, and the story idea that was behind it came rushing back. I had completely forgotten about this concept until I saw this drawing. But because I remembered what I wanted to accomplish in this drawing (two people facing each other through a glass separator), the story idea came with it.Derp drawing

So bust out those pencils and paper and get sketching! Don’t worry about how it looks, all that counts is that you started. 🙂

God bless,

KD17

A quick word about my book reviews…

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Hey, young writers! I just wanted to saw a quick word about my book reviews. When I write them, keep in mind that they are not your average book reviews. See, I don’t review the story so much as the writing style and/or the other technical aspects that make up the story itself. The books I do review I have learned a lot from and already consider them as worth reading. However, for those of you who would also like to read a more traditional book review in addition to the ones on here, I will be including links (when I can find them!) within my articles to a great website called relzreviewz.com. I hope you’ll check it out. 🙂 And if you want to find out how you can get a hold of one of these books, you can click on the front cover picture within my review which will redirect you to our YWD store (which can also be reached by clicking on the YWD Amazon Store link on the homepage).

The Princess by Lori Wick

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The PrincessBack Cover:

In the land of Pendaran, lively, affectionate Shelby Parker was born to a simple life—yet her mother, Daria, and those around her cannot help but notice the graces she possess. Among those taking note of Shelby’s winsome ways and tender heart are the king and queen of the House of Markham, who are seeking a new wife for their widowed son, Prince Nikolai.

To uphold a long-cherished tradition of their country, Shelby and Nikolai agree to an arranged marriage. But while Nikolai is a perfect gentleman at public functions, he remains distant and shy at home, leaving Shelby to ponder the inner workings of his heart. Will the prince ever love her as he did his first wife? Can the faith they share overcome the barriers between them?

My Writing Takeaway:

So, I have to confess, when I first started reading this book I got to about Chapter 3 before I had to put it down. Why? Because I was confused! My brain (still up at 2 o’clock in the morning I might add) was running around in circles trying to figure out why I was able to understand and hear all of the characters’ thoughts within one scene. I even told my mom about it! It just didn’t make sense to me, until I realized: the book was written in 3rd person omniscient POV rather than 3rd person limited. I was like, “OOOH! Now that makes sense!” The issue was that I had been so used to reading stories where only a specific character’s thoughts and feelings are revealed to the reader, but no one else’s (unless the next scene/chapter focuses on a different character). You see things through the character’s eyes without it being told from their perspective. However, in Lori Wick’s novel, all of the character’s feelings, thoughts, motivations, and reactions to the other characters and situations within the story are revealed to the reader. Similarly, this style is one favored by Jane Austen (author of the classic: Pride & Prejudice, one of my favorite novels of all time!). Now, usually in movies and in books (specifically in the suspense genre) we are used to not knowing everything about a character. We may draw conclusions based on their intonation, actions, and background, but we don’t know for sure. Because of this, I always feel like I’m solving a mystery or putting together a puzzle as I read; the puzzle/mystery being the plot. I enjoy this immensely, which means I’m a big fan of 3rd person limited since “pieces” of the characters and plot are revealed little by little, and a lot of inferring is needed. That also meant that I was a little apprehensive about reading in 3rd person omniscient, but I have to say, it is one of the best POVs to write from. It’s an effective style to use for many reasons but the main one is: there is no “catching-up”. What do I mean by this? Well, in 3rd person limited POV, like I said before, bits of the plot and characters are revealed at a time. If two characters are in a scene, you can only hear one side’s thoughts in that moment. You then have to write/read another section to find out what the other character was thinking during the previous encounter. In that way, you are constantly having to reflect back on a previous scene in order to present a fuller picture to your readers. And if you have multiple main characters/story-lines—you may feel as though you’re not moving forward in the story but rather moving backward. For my FF series, I have several main characters and story-lines I want to include, so after reading this book, I was inspired to try and use this POV as it allows me develop my characters, set the scene quickly and effectively, and focus on the driving action of the story. Therefore, my major writing takeaway from this lovely story is: TRY TO WRITE IN 3rd PERSON OMNISCIENT! If you don’t like it, no worries, but give it a try at least and maybe even figure out which POV is right for your story. Overall, I’d have to say that The Princess is one of my new favorite CCRs. It’s full of romance, realistic characters, drama, and a heartfelt message about God’s grace, goodness, and sovereignty throughout all circumstances. I highly suggest that you read this book! 🙂

*This story contains mature themes such as marriage/intimacy.*

The struggle is real

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After church services today, I ran into one of my fellow writing friends. Almost as soon as she saw me and gave me a hug, she exclaimed, “I HAVEN’T DONE ANY WRITING THIS SUMMER!” *face palm*. I then replied with, “ME TOO. THE STRUGGLE IS REAL.” We then spent the next 15 minutes talking sporadically and very rapidly about how we had set so many goals for ourselves as far as our writing went this summer and were able to commiserate with each other about our “failures” together. 😛 It was great catching up with her, but talking with her made me realize something: not writing anything isn’t failing per say. Sure, it’s the beginning of July and I had originally planned to finish my CCR novel by the end of August and haven’t written anything beyond a paragraph since NaNoWriMo last fall…but hey, I’ve been doing a lot of other things! I always feel like a writer never stops writing, because it’s true. Throughout the camps, volleyball games, shopping, and various other summer activities that have kept me from writing, I’ve actually come up with a lot of new excerpt ideas, both for completely new stories and current ones. What’s more: if you are like me and feeling as though you aren’t getting time to write, maybe that’s God’s way of saying, “Hey, focus on Me and serving My people right now.” At least, that’s usually the case for me. Whenever I listen to Him, I find that I’m blessed with a new sense of creativity and a wonderful feeling of satisfaction, because I’m succeeding in serving Him, even though I’m failing to write. 😉

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Writing Update: 6/26/16

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Why, hello! It’s been a while…so, I’ve been going through/reorganizing all my files, and do mean ALL of them. It’s been tedious work at times. I’ve also been in the process of writing tiny pieces of dialogue and developing a new form of outlining. In addition, I’ve been experimenting with this new, revolutionary method of using one journal for everything. I know, right? ? I’m happy to say that operation: Everything Journal is a go. ? It’s been hard since I have over 60 journals that I want to use, but it’s nice having everything in one place. (More on that later…) Let’s see, what else have I been up to? Uhhhh…oh! I’ve been drawing some concept art for my FF series which has been fun. AND I’VE GOTTEN SOME AWESOME NEW STUFF FOR WRITING/WRITING INSPO THAT I WILL HAVE TO WRITE ABOUT IN MY ARTICLES. New methods to kick-start writing, here I come!

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